Responding to chapters 3&4

            These last couple chapters have been extremely useful to me and my writing. Some of the ideas in the writing and rewriting chapter were interesting to me, I had always wondered and struggled with trying to find a way to start my essays. The section on the introduction paragraph was enlightening to me and gave me some great ideas on how to start a paper. The best chapter though, was the chapter on description, my writing had always seemed kind of dull and I would always use the same descriptive words. I wanted to get better in this area and I know i will be reffering to the suggestions mad in the chapter alot.